October Girl

Wow, I love this poem it just hit me with alot of emotion it's perfect and well it's great. I wish you could expand it alot more and if it ...

(Lexy) "Rose, your not going to lose your foot, just settle down and you'll be fine, I know it hurts honey. It will all be over soon." I said. "What ...

(Lexy) I couldn't lose anyone in this flock, losing the use of my hand, I could live with but losing someone else I couldn't. I blinked away the tears because ...

(Lexy) Blade fell backward and I caught her, she hit my hand and I winced. I held her up and slowly lowered her to the floor placing her head on ...

(Lexy) Mayze hit the rat hard on the head and it finally let go of my bleeding skin. "Are you ok?" She looked at my hand. "At least it's not ...

y thank you.... your um.... 8/10 and now *vanishes into thin air*

10./10 lol I love it!

(Lexy) "Oh shut up Reed." I said as I picked up a rusty pipe and began heading for the rats, I broke out my wings and lunged for one of ...

um... huh huh 6/10

*Picking up where I left off* (Lexy) I looked at Reed, I'd won once again. "Look's like we're going in." Mayze said. "I can't walk! Do you get it?! I ...

(Lexy) "Their rats... what's the big deal?" I said. "Doesn't matter whatever the hell they are their going to come after us." Reed shot back. "Well we can't see our ...

(Lexy) As I hovered about ground with everyone else I started laughing. Reed glared at me. "What's so funny? We have to get out of here, now!" Reed shouted. I ...

(Lexy) I faught against ZT and Colt. I still glared at Reed and he glared back at me, maybe it wasn't his fault, maybe I was just trying to blame ...

lol thanks but I changed it now! :lol:

8/10 ha ha ha ha ha